Questions

I'm obeying Shelley's charge to answer the following questions with only one word.  I had to cheat a little.

Your Cell Phone? None
Your Hair? Long
Your Mother? Love
Your Father? Wise
Your Favorite Food? Clementines
Your Dream Last Night? Forgotten
Your Favorite Drink? Naked Juice
Your Dream/Goal? Publication
What Room Are You In? Family Room
Your Hobby? Gardening
Your Fear? Dishes
Where Do You See Yourself In Six Years? Nevada
Where Were You Last Night? Home
Something That You Aren't? Refined 
Muffins? Gloria Ambrosia
Wish List Item? Trees
Where Did You Grow Up? Nevada
Last Thing You Did? Laundry
What Are You Wearing? Pajamas
Your TV? No
Your Pets? Cats
Friends? Yes
Your Life? Kids
Your Mood?  Impatient (or so Ben tells me)
Missing Someone? Mom
Vehicle? Caravan
Something You Aren't Wearing? Make-up
Your Favorite Store? Bookstore
Your Favorite Color? Blue
When Was The Last Time You Laughed? Today
Last Time You Cried? Forgotten
Your Best Friend? Ben
One Place You Go To Over And Over Again? Bed 
Facebook? Sometimes
Favorite Place To Eat? Cafe Rio

If you read this, you are automatically charged with the task of answering these questions yourself.  But only if you want to.

Now I'm going to post the video my daughter has been begging to watch for the last five minutes.

I know.  It's a bit morbid for a two-year-old, but she thinks it's great.

A Quick Update

Thank you so much for your encouraging words.  I've filled two holes and revised the scenes from my first draft up to the next hole.  Now, I only have two holes left to fill, but these will take longer; I could probably call them trenches.  ;)  

I find revising scenes I've let sit for a while easier than revising something I've just written. Problems leap out at me.  The good writing just does it's job and moves me through the story without grabbing my attention. Anything--it doesn't matter how clever it is--that jolts me out of the story needs to be revised or deleted.  Even the humor should feel like it belongs.

And, last night, I had a much better idea for an ending, so I guess I'll be re-writing that too. That's okay though.  I knew my ending wasn't good enough when I wrote it, but I had more fun writing that scene than any other scene in the novel.  I think I'll keep it as a deleted scene.  Do any of you keep deleted scenes? 

If you have a few minutes, this one is pretty good.  :)

Filling in Holes

I realized last night, as I was revising (or procrastinating writing the next chapter), why I have such a hard time writing anything longer than a picture book in chronological order.  It's not necessarily a bad thing; instead of struggling with writer's block, I move on or work on something else.  Unfortunately, I leave holes to fill in later on.  Sometimes filling them in is easy, and sometimes adding a couple of hundred words is a struggle.  As long as I keep adding words though, I learn more about the characters and what motivates them. Those words may not make it through my next revision, but they add something to the story anyway.

When I was in college, I took a creative writing class where the main projects were writing a short story and a personal essay.  For the short story, our professor had us write about a decision we'd made.  Then he had us write the experience from someone else's point of view and fictionalize it.  Then he had us write through to the end of our story before he had us go back and write the beginning.  So, when I get an idea for a novel, I rarely start at the beginning.  I dive into the action.  I have to go back and set it up later, but I just write whatever scene comes to me until the plot starts to emerge.  It doesn't take long.  If I get stuck, I write background on characters to get to know them better.

It works, but I've been revising and filling in holes and revising the new stuff for the last third of my novel since October.  Of course, I took November off for NaNoWriMo, and I always binge read in December.  And then, there were all of those fun writing contest the first week in January.  But I've been working hard since then. Honest.  And I think the end is in sight.  I'll let you know when I get there.  It's kind of like Magellan finding the East Indies in this clip.

As for my inability to write a first draft from beginning to end, I'm blaming that one on the professor. ;)  

A Lovely Book

If reading a book that's been written in letters makes you insane, this may not be the book for you, but I loved it. "The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Society" is the best adult book I've read in years. 

There were so many things about this book that made me happy.  I loved the idea that a certain famous author/playwright might have written letters to a little girl who'd lost her cat, letters with stories of the cat's adventures.  I loved how sharing books and stories brought the characters together.  I was sad to learn that Mary Ann Shaffer died before the book was published though.  Had she written more books, I would have picked them up.  Annie Barrows has other children's books.  I've read one or two from her "Ivie and Bean" series, and they were wickedly funny.  I can't tell you how refreshing it was for me to find a book written for my age group that I could connect with.  

Catching Fire vs. The Hunger Games

One of my friends borrowed CATCHING FIRE  from one of their friends for me a couple of days ago.  Suzanne Collins definitely wrote another page turner, but I can wait to finish the series.

I liked the first one better.

Best Series Books of 2009

I've been meaning to recommend these as part of a GREAT BOOKS I READ IN 2009 post, but I don't think that post is going to happen.  January is almost over, and I read way too many great books last year.  No, I mean it. One of my older sisters tried to talk me to going to a 12-steps type program for my reading addiction, but I'm not willing to kick the habit.  In this post, I am only going to tackle a few of my favorite series books, and I am only going to post one picture from each series.

Easy Readers - the ELEPHANT AND PIGGY books, by Mo Willems.  If you have a child learning to read, especially a boy, you'll want to check these out.  Funny books are the best!

YA Science Fiction - the DRAGONBACK ADVENTURES, by Timothy Zahn.  I almost didn't pick these up because I wasn't crazy about the cover on the first one (that still isn't the way I picture the characters), but I knew I liked Zahn's writing.  I can't recommend these enough.  I loved Draco, the warrior poet.  He was one of those characters you want to hang out with, and he's not even the main character.  I loved the plot loops and the way Zahn resolved them.  I will read all six of these books again. This is the first one.

Children's/YA Fantasy - PERCY JACKSON AND THE OLYMPIANS, by Rick Riordan.  There are six of these as well.  I went into this series skeptical, and I'm still marveling over the man's ability to incorporate mythology without getting bogged down in it.  There were no bogs.  The stories were extremely fast paced, but I still connected with the characters and understood what was going on.  Everyone I've recommended this series to has loved it, especially the boys. My favorite in the series was THE SEA OF MONSTERS, but I've always loved THE ODYSSEY. This is a picture of the first book.  

If you've read any of these books already, or if you pick them up, let me know what you think.     

Heroic Cockroaches and Stuff

I thought I was behind the times, reading THE HUNGER GAMES last night (and into the morning, if I'm being honest).  I mean, it's been out since 2008.  The critics already raved and gave awards to Suzanne Collins. 

I thought I'd better put CATCHING FIRE on hold through our library system today.  I'd rather be reading it today, but I didn't know the first one would end the way it did, and I'm really trying to turn some of my reading time into writing time.  There's only so much time in the day. I knew the wait would be bad because I had to wait quite a while for the first one.  I am now 92nd in line for CATCHING FIRE.  So, it looks like I'll meet my writing and revision goals for February after all.

I read GREGOR THE OVERLANDER and the rest of her first series last year, and would whole-heartedly recommend it, if the later books in the series weren't so violent.  I loved her characters.  If you've read the first book, you know what I mean.  The cockroaches were my favorites.  And there was this really great bonding moment at the end of the last book that redeemed the series for me.  I felt like it needed redeeming after all the death and suffering I waded through.  But my husband thinks I'm too sensitive, and maybe he's right.  So, if reading about children and teens thrown into kill or be killed situations doesn't particularly bother you, her books are amazing.  There is meaning behind the death and suffering, and it's going to be very hard for me to wait for that next book.